Sounds are lit and animation is rllyyy good. You should try doing another one using bowsette, and maybe make it a bit longer.

EPIC!! I like the art style, the story, and the game mechanics (tho a lil bit sluggish).
Still has a couple of bugs, like characters not appearing when they're there, and bugs on the scenes.
The "art style" (if you know what I mean) of the "you know what" is pretty cool, buuut could've been better.
I HOPE THIS GAME BECOMES AVAILABLE IN GAMEJOLT!!

FRKN AWESOME! Nice job hentaiwrite and team!

I've downloaded the game on a diff link and I was in frkn awe for the new demo. LIKE HECK MAN! So I thought that making a new acc and commenting here in newgrounds would be the best way to approach you guys. (That also means this is my 2nd acc, 1st acc was remarkiplay)

Good stuff:
It's a nice thing that you guys added a lot on the hub(the screen stuff not the map), and added a more interactive gameplay like making more choices and finding the fragments, which makes us actually play the game to actually find it. The story has gotten quite clearer and I've found an actual use of the computer stuff (u knw the one u interact with). The story still sounds a bit weird like milk is used as energy to power buildings (sm1 call Einstein to deal with this project). There were new stuff like power-ups, limited save points, an actual hub(safe place), more depth in-story, decisions that make a butterfly effect(which means when u make a decision the other path is erased), and the map isn't a linear line anymore unlike before as I remember it to be.

Stuff to improve/change:
I may sound super crazed rn but I also have some other stuff I want you guys to knw
The music does fill the silence of the rooms but it honestly doesn't seem to fit the atmosphere of the game. It also intrudes with the (HOO LALA) scenes. Maybe have a better music that still is most probably retro or 8-bit, and have the music automatically lower down during (OOOH) scenes only if possible.
The top-left of the hub shows Talia's condition, so maybe have more emotes on that one especially when she's getting hit, "sweaty" and "about to explode" or "being showered upon". Ya knw stuff like that.
When I opened the downloaded game, the sides seem to be in static at times and if I minimize the game the sound starts to glitch all the time.
Another thing is the game is missing different resolution choices and ability to be sized. I'ts a big problem especially if the game is to big for my screen or too small for my screen. It also doesn't have the maximize button available.

My personal questions:
Since this is my 2nd acc and I won't be allowed to make another comment/review I wanna ask everythn I've been wanting to ask
1.) Will the full game have a public release and public download links for free?
2.) Is there a planned date for completion?
3.) Are you guys super dedicated?
4.) Are you guys looking for more help?
5.) Should we expect another public demo?

Final words:
I'm a super fan of this game that I've started recommending this game ever since the first demo. When I heard that a new public demo was released I went straight trying to find download links. I still don't have the ability to support you guys by financial means, but maybe ideas will be good enough? Once I'm able to have the money I swear I'll support you guys so much that I might just be the highest supporting patreon (if there is). I've been waiting for another demo ever since the past 2 years I believe and I'm happy to hear from you guys out in the public with more stuff to offer.
WHAT BETTER WAY TO HAVE A BIRTHDAY!
My birthday is just a day away now, and I'm happy to have this demo, to hear from you guys, and to know that this game isn't in anyway dead.

and that's it! Thank you hentaiwriter and team! Hope we hear from you guys soon!
- oraflanker